If I had a
pencil
If I
had a pencil, I would demonstrate that I am not only able to take water from
one place to another or to help my family to clean the house. I am able to do
many things, like writing. I could write whatever I want, my adventures and
experiences, stories and poems, take notes to learn, teach other people to
write, etc…
If I
had a pencil, I would describe all my adventures, my experiences, my feelings...
I wouldn’t have to remember the main things and forget the details.
If I
had a pencil, I would become a professional writer with my amazing stories and
fantastic poems. I wouldn’t have to dream it; I would have to live it. I could
live doing what I want, being a writer.
If I
had a pencil, I would have a better education because I wouldn’t forget the
things I learn if I wrote them in papers. And, if I don’t learn in the school,
in the future, I will not have a good job and I won’t earn much more money to
live better.
If I
had a pencil, I would draw how I see the world, instead of imagining it. The
tall trees, the colourful flowers, the docile animals, the people living in
peace, no death from lack of food or water, all the happy families, the world
without wars…
If I had a
pencil, I would give it to my family and friends, as a gift, in special days. Because, what good is it having something that only
you enjoy?
If I
had a pencil, I would have fun with it, imagining that I am an amazing wizard
that can disappear in front of the people, can fly to very far places and can
do other incredible tricks; a conductor travelling to other countries to direct
the most famous Mozart’s symphonies; or an international drummer touring around
the world.
If I
had a pencil, I would write all the things that happen throughout the day in my
diary. I could save it and in the future I would see it and remember the incredible
things that happen, like when I got my first pencil and started to do things
that I like, write and draw whatever I want. And, if I became a famous person,
I could sell my diary and earn money.
My story is two times.
ResponderEliminarI think all stories are very well. My text is not a story like Ana's or Maria's, it is like Elena's and Martha's story. Instead of tell you a real story, it tells what you could do with a pencil, a job, etc.
To my mind, I think that all the story are very good, very deep and very well developed. I made my story thinking about all those children that suffer the same thing that I told.
ResponderEliminarThis is a good idea to compare our projects and story in our own web page. I like every story because they are original and show how hard is the real life. When I was making my story I was thinking about what would I do if I stay in these situation.
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